The first line that really hooked my senses was as follows: “In all his course; nor yet in the cold ground, Where thy pale form was laid,” (Bryant 19-20). I think I noticed this part of the poem because when I read it, it made sense and felt kind of real. I have been to funerals and it is true, there is a cold chill among the people there. William Bryant brings us to reality here because we all know that the ground is cold and so is the pale corpse that is being laid to rest.
William Bryant says the dead individuals should go “to mix forever with the elements” (Bryant 26). I think that the reality of this line has probably changed a little bit since the 1800s when this was written. I am almost sure that back in the day people actually buried the dead right in the dirt, but today, we use caskets. In biology we learned about fossils and how they are the skeletal remains of old organisms. That actually supports Bryant’s point here by saying that if the bodies were actually laid right on the dirt, the soft tissues of the body really would mix in with the dirt and fertilize the soil. I think that William Bryant has a deeper meaning than the actual physical remains of the corpse though.
It was really interesting to me how the author used over ten lines of this poem talking about how you are not dying alone. In lines 30-41 Bryant says “shalt thou retire alone” (32). I like the fact that he highlights the positive aspects of death and dying. By saying that you are not going to die alone the author is kind of comforting the reader. William Bryant is saying that dying is really just joining the earlier generations in “the elements.” William Bryant says that the bright stars of heaven are shining on those sad in the presence of death (46-47). Again, I have noticed that the author is highlighting the positive aspects of the harsh topic. Greek mythology is tied into the poem here because in mythology the stars we said to have been the lights of the dead.
I agree with Mary Ellen Snodgrass in the positive criticism on Thanatopsis. She seemed to have only positive things to say about this poem. Snodgrass also noticed that Bryant only refers to death as a “natural event” and the worst thing he said about death was the “loss of individuality and the absorption of a decaying human into the earth” (Snodgrass).
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