In winter we get a snow day from school
Children go outside although it is cool
Their mothers watch at the window with care
Little girls struggle to wrap up their hair
Children have trouble to get up the hill
Sometimes they slow down because of the chill
Some kids wake early to go out and sled,
while others are still asleep in their bed
The snow will fall down on top of your head,
but it's all worth it to go out and sled.
The brisk winter winds will turn your nose pink
And when you're all done you might need a drink
Teachers are mad 'cause they don't get to teach
Preachers are sad that they don't get to preach
Rich children can sled, but so can the poor
All you have to do is get out the door
People must sit down to lace up their boots
You better watch out for trees and their roots
When you come in, hang your coat on the hook
Grab a blanket and sit down with a book.
If your mom is nice, she'll make you a drink
Pour in the mix and stir it clink clink clink
Serve you hot chocolate and give you a wink
What you don't finish just pour down the sink
Children have trouble to get up the hill
Sometimes they slow down because of the chill
Some kids wake early to go out and sled,
while others are still asleep in their bed
The snow will fall down on top of your head,
but it's all worth it to go out and sled.
The brisk winter winds will turn your nose pink
And when you're all done you might need a drink
Teachers are mad 'cause they don't get to teach
Preachers are sad that they don't get to preach
Rich children can sled, but so can the poor
All you have to do is get out the door
People must sit down to lace up their boots
You better watch out for trees and their roots
When you come in, hang your coat on the hook
Grab a blanket and sit down with a book.
If your mom is nice, she'll make you a drink
Pour in the mix and stir it clink clink clink
Serve you hot chocolate and give you a wink
What you don't finish just pour down the sink
Katie, I really like your poem! It does a really good job of following the iambic pentameter and is easy to read. Also, I like the rhyme scheme you used. It makes your words all flow together. The poem also represents the romanticism time period really well!
ReplyDeleteVery good poem Katie. The iambic pentameter is evident, and it is an easy poem to follow.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is hilariously awesome. It is so fantastic and it is obviously because of your rhymes and its flow with Iambic Pentameter.
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